All Comments on 'Loser'

Its warped... and I like that. Would be nice to see what happened before to cause it, and if the character ever develops.

something different, something blue.

I liked it :-)

TabithaKat.

...And very different. It was a bit tricky to follow in places and I would've loved to see it fleshed out a lot more, it has the makings of an obsessively facinating story. A bit of mind play, a bit of taunting... and very creepy.

Excellently done.

The fact that she was in his head, but not physically existing is something very enticing. I wonder what he would have done if Jenny said something more like "no, I do want a ride home" but then decided to take him in the car the way he envisioned the other entity doing? Would that have been better? I adore the story though. Someday I hope to have a loser of my own to torment and have them obsess over delighting me.