All Comments on 'Losing Control at the Lake Ch. 03'

Not sure why you're cutting yourself off at two pages for each chapter here. Seemed like there was a little more to this one that was left on the table. This chapter was really good, though, probably best yet.

Blown a load on each chapter!! keep writing

My goodness, Ive been comming back every single day to see whats happening. I started geeking out when I saw a new chapter had been posted. Thank you!!!!! I was a little dissipointed in the size because hellloooooo i wanted way more, but thank you! :) I love this story :DDDDD Cannot wait to read more.

I'm glad you love Dana & Jayme....I'm a little attached to them myself. Chapter 4 was submitted and should be up any day.

ive been reading literotica since i was 14 (im 23 now!) and this is the first ongoing story ive been hooked on and coming back to every few days to check for new chapters! such a hot and well written story...heres to anxiously waiting for a new chapter! cheers!

Keep this going. AMazing