All Comments on 'Losing Control at the Lake Ch. 06'

Absolutely perfect! I love this series so much.

This story is sooooo amazing. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

When is chapter 8 coming? I check back every day! :)

i hope she fucks derek!!!!

Another chapter please! I'm begging you!

Jayme wants her all to himself and is really turning into a selfish insensitive prick, and Dana's no better. she thinks she's in love with Jayme and still loves her brother but she doesn't. It's all about lust and selfishness on both their parts. If it wasn't they'd have bit the bullet and announced their relationship as soon as Derek found out. If they really were in love and believed it to strong and unbreakable they would have come out by now. No two little cowards. Derek was the only one who was brave, he poured out his heart to his twin and was stomped flat. Let something bad happen to Derek that severs the twin bond permanently, then see what happens... how does Dana react, How does Jayme react. based on how he acted during a family funeral event, it'd be pretty obvious how he'd be....callous to Dana and how she feels only "I need to fuck you." not make love not comforting No only his selfish addiction to sex with his niece, destroying her relationship with her twin.