All Comments on 'Losing My Religion Pt. 01'

As long as you give them the chance to properly fall in love and develop a lasting relationship I can see this going fun places. In the meantime I foresee lots of sex with lots of girls and lots to teach her lil bro of outside world. 4* for now.

Overall, a good submission. My only complaint would be that it could have been longer, with more character development.

I'd be interested in reading more

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Hope for more. I really love this story.

hope to read more soon, perhaps in the and they can save mom too.