All Comments on 'Losing the Fight'

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Crusader235Crusader235about 3 years ago
Blue

Hmm, this gives `Support the Blue` a hole new meaning. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Oof

Have you ever watched combat sports? If swinging at the arms was effective they would do it. I'm sorry but you would of been better off writing this as a WWE style fight than trying for a realistic approach and it was just to goofy.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story, needs a part two where the winner starts exercising more control over her bitch. Changes in make-up, dress, and hairstyle. Taking her to the gym and controlling her workouts to enhance her figure. Maybe a part three where Owner adds tattoos, piercings, bigger boobs, and lip injections to transform her Bitch into her Bimbo Sex Toy, perhaps making her work in a strip club or Lesbian bar.

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