Lost Bloodlines Ch. 05

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Oberon's face shifted, and I was immediately reminded of my father as he stared benevolently into the camera. "To all monsters who may be watching this broadcast, have hope. We will come for you, and bring you back to your own kind. No matter what the humans decide, we will protect and care for you as if you were our own."

He turned to the beautiful woman at his side, and she smiled encouragingly at him before he moved to face the camera once more. "Three days," his voice boomed, and then every screen in the tent shut off abruptly.

The room was silent for a long moment before everyone started yelling.

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AN: And we're back with questions, answers, and answers that raise more questions. We have passed the point in the story I dubbed as the prologue, and now can really get into the meat of things. I hope you all are enjoying reading this story as much as I am writing it! As always, please leave a comment below, and I send my thanks to everyone who commented on my last chapter. -HistoricallyInaccurate

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FrancIsco59FrancIsco594 months ago

Briliant realy held me. Looking forward to the following chapters. Thank you so much.

4275727065657342757270656573about 1 year ago

Very good. I particularly enjoyed the sub scene. Hope to see more. Either way, very high-quality story.

SuperImpSuperImpabout 1 year ago
Was enjoying it until...

I was enjoying the story until Lilith got all subby for Riley. I just don't enjoy a sub MC at all.

Throwaway131447Throwaway131447over 1 year ago

Good lord I am bloody loving this story. Well done mate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great!

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

I'm loving this story. very imaginative

QueenNovels1QueenNovels1over 1 year ago

Where or where are the other chapters, I can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Eight Seats? With the Seelie Court being one. So obviously the Unseelie as well... I would assume there is a celestial/(good religious) and a demonic/(bad religious) seat based on Sam, Victoria, Damien, and Lillith's existence, maybe some kind of Taoist inspired pair of seats to match Draco? No clue about the 7th and 8th seats though...

Hydra831Hydra831almost 2 years ago

Shit, came across the first chapter last night. The burned through them. This stuff is good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I don't think I can say it any better than SirDigby already has, but suffice to say I came across this series last night and proceeded to read all available chapters in one sitting. I love the idea of hidden fantasy worlds in the vein of Eoin Colfer's Artemis Fowl. This is also the first of many stories I've read on this site that I've felt compelled to comment on, if that holds any weight. Seriously well written, please continue for as long as you are passionate for it - I'll be here for each installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is some Genius writing work done here , capturing each individuals emotions. I love this series, pls continue this work and don't stop

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesaralmost 2 years ago

My oh my, how the turn tables! I'm not surprised Riley would be a domme, but I couldn't predict how -effortlessly- she brought Lilith to heel. I can only look back with wry dread how that first encounter would have played out if allowed its (super)natural progression. Once again, kudos for the cool-down—I'm not in the BDSM circle, but I've heard from those that are that smut stories often critically neglect the post-session wellness check.

This is fast becoming one of my favourite stories on the site, the sort of urban-fantasy epic I'd write myself if I could ever focus my imagination. The premise of a previously-hidden Magic World merging into modern reality coincidentally calls to mind the eRPG Lilith's Throne, but better developed and with a nuanced eye to the global dynamic. I think this is the first time I've come across a serial here that's devoted multiple chapters to a defined prologue—given what we've seen so far, I can only imagine where the 'main' story leads.

"Fuck Homeland Security, fuck the monsters, and fuck all these wizards."

If you'll permit me a Max0r moment: "I'm gonna build a new future, Chuck, one where we won't have to hide our fucking from anyone. And for that, I want you by my side: to build a world truly free from the consequences of our attractions, just like the Founding Fathers intended!"

Apexrogue99Apexrogue99almost 2 years ago

This is one of the best stories I've read here. It's absolutely amazing and please continue to write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I’ve never commented on any story before, and I would like to start it off here saying this is the most incredible read I’ve ever had. Please keep this series going

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