All Comments on 'Lost Boy Ch. 01'

Make her pregnant by the end , as sign for leaving him all those years

Please continue ASAP

Can't wait for chapter 2

Please continue with chapter 2 ASAP. Great so far.

Nice start.

Great start please continue.

it's a start for a story.

more like a page to one, not a chapter though

Please continue

So, the cheating wife tag pretty much guarantees this is headed to a dark, fucked up place. Thanks for warning us ahead of time.

Awsome start. I hope this continues! We'll be waiting.

Cheeky fecker! That's a hook! Can't wait for more.

I don't think that was chapter 1 it was more of page 1. I think it will great story if you don't leave us hanging next time. Not any star for this but waiting for next part

Can't wait for part 2 and more hopefully.

In real life, the premise of this story is a bad idea. Nothing good can come of it. With the preceeding said, I would be interested in finding out how it ends.

Chapter 2?

Where's chapter 2? You stop and leave us hanging not fare!!!!!!!!!

It says a six part series. Hello where is the rest?????

So far, so good, but much yet to be discovered.

As it stands, this story is very effective. BUT, and it’s a big but, we need more. Oliver has just arrived in Raleigh, and introduced himself to his (supposed) birth mother. What happens then? We have to wait for chapter 2, and I certainly hope that will be forthcoming very soon. Thank you very much for this “starter”, Lydia. You write very well, and I can experience each environment as you describe it. Now I’m looking forward to the next instalment.

Write raw sex of M and S

And it’s hanging 🤦🏼‍♂️🤦🏼‍♂️🤦🏼‍♂️

Well written. Will there be a second chapter?

Such a great start, I really hope it continues