by thornapple
Great story! Wrong category, but nice work. (Not a "humor and satire" story; "romance" would be more accurate.) This story is lovely and touching.
-- KK in Texas
well i wont call it a humorous story, but it was excellent otherwise..loved the cute storyline
and humorous as well in my opinion. Fantastic writing, and I don't know how you kept the dialogue up to such a fantastic for the whole story.
Are you a freaking scribe or what. Awesome awesome awesome story. Even better than most erotic stories here and that's an understatement. More of Alex and Gail.
One word: WOW!!!
Totally awesome, heavily romantic and stupidly humorous.
Going through my list of female best friends who might be in love with me...
A story with only one inconceivable aspect, Gina finding the camera and needing sex from Alex. The rest of it could have actually happened which makes this a really good story.
And the love story is just great. Jennie's reluctance with Alex was puzzling so you could have explained that.
Cute. Sweet. Beautiful. Story. And a gift for and/or by dint of hard work a skill for understated hilarity. Definitely delving into author’s other works. And for some reason, suddenly need to meet a woman like Gail.