All Comments on 'Lost Footing and Falling on a Cock'

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Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature12 months ago

Fast! Furious! Totally inconceivably unlikely, but if we're going to write, write big! Shoot for the moon. I like to think, if the impossible hadn't happened then nobody would have written about it. So the implausible is completely fair to include.

RangeExpanderRangeExpander12 months ago

Who cares about plausibility when it is so much fun?!

blackknight314blackknight31411 months ago

So far so good. Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

lc69hunterlc69hunter11 months ago

Love this. It was supposed to happen this way. They just didn't know it

WIDOWMANWIDOWMAN4 months ago

Good buildup of sexual tension, beats the hell out of my first time!

texlootexloo4 months ago

Well it was not boring! Sex scenes often bore me, but this one didn't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Fun but very unbelievable. I like the switching of perspectives but I can't seriously imagine the two just fucking each other after penetration in this circumstance. Would have been nice to have some more emotions and realism.

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