by LucysFox
Something like this but with the MC being way more defiant sounds good
More than once in the series, you've made me feel an unstoppable desire to wear lingerie and perfume at times when I shouldn't because of the risk. And now here I am. Shivering and with messed up panties.
I enjoyed the story. The way you described Lily made me yearn to see her. The ending left me with lots of questions. I did very much my enjoy your form of writing. Thank you. I hope you do more stories?
I'd like to see a follow up chapter of Lily working in the brothel. I'd also like to see a little more of Lain's thinking on why she considers herself a savior. Yes she may make the girls lives better but she is still an exploiter and not a benevolent benefactor. The sex in this story was lackluster at best for me, nothing against your writing it just wasn't to my taste. The mental turmoil was very well written. The one person Lain really needed working for her is a psychologist. With all these troubled girls they really needed a trained professional to help them get past their past.
One last complaint I see happen in a lot of stories. What kind of idiot sticks their dick between two serrated cutting edges controlled by an unwilling participant? Sorry but if were in Damian's position. I would make sure Lain's dick was no longer her source of sexual release if she let me near it after doing what she did to him.
Need more, this series is amazing!!!! Its kinda weird, cause Lily and I are similar. I wasn't 18 when my mistress took me, I was 16 and my frame wasn't as small and Lily's but very similar. There needs to be moar!!! Especially the training with Selene, my Mistress's friend who helped train me was like Selene but she was far less patient. But I learned!
wish would happen to me I wana get gang raped by BBC in getting 707) 235 -50 90 text if you can help me become a shemale hooker thanks
It’s not hard to identify with Lily’s blissful feelings, as she’s pampered and forced into dressing up in beautiful salacious outfits by Domme, gorgeous females. And With The same type of loving approval his deceased Mum once had provided Damien as a small and helpless child.
Each boys fascination with dressing up like mommy is universal. Sometimes they like that feeling of feminine sexual power once they first slip their sisters panties, yet are overcome guilt and resist the experience. But for Others it becomes an addictive roll, that they’ll always play as often as possible.
One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read, as a transgender myself, the introspection part was hard for me, I even cry as I came from a shitty family and wish I had had a similar destiny to Lily, I identified with her hard as her anxiety, fear of the world and other issues are things that I have lived myself
Thanks for this beautiful story
You wrote this so well, really, I dont want to seem like im beimg critical. I just was unimmersed a bit near the end and I thought Id offer some potential insight. In my experience, after this sort of climax, theres an extra final wave that rushes over me only after the last inch or 2 pops out. Its about 10-20% of the initial intensity, even if I get to lie there and come down a minute or 2 first. Theres just this involuntary contraction that wrings the knot out the last bit. Also multiple orgasms can happen sometimes and dependimg on the amount of buildup involved, even cause temporary loss of cognition, self awareness and motor functions. That kinda think can deffinitely make a person submit 😅 Keep writing! 😊
This has all the hallmarks of a really good story. But it is so long and convoluted, I have almost lost the will to live. The continual return of Lily to the whining and wishing to be out of the place is now wearisome. At one level this has everything, it is just too long as and drawn out.
Lovely story wish it had sequel so much early development for such minor ending.
Loved loved loved this story ! I would have lied a longer more detailed version (give me more chance of imaging that i am Lily and what i would do ?) takes me back to my youth wearing my mothers sister clothes 50 years ago, i might have gone on to be sissy/femboy if i was born later, things where very different then, so your stories (without to much sadism) let my imagination run wild without harming anyone. Thanks Lucy
In A Word I Love it I Saw my Self as lily. I Hope There is A sequel to it to see what happens with lily And Her Room Mate Tegan Will There be A Continues Romance Between Them? Let us know. Thank You. Author Lucy's Fox.
must be more too cum it was great reading started to think i was in lilys place and got excited with her. would have liked more feelings on when the hormones started to take affect but
it was Great reading
I loved this story. Sorry I did not write sooner but I was so engrossed with the story I did not take the time to write after each chapter. I am hoping there might me more about Lain and Lilly and company. This was a captivating tale.
Forced feminisation is not really a preferred tropwe of mine, but your ability to capture lust and fascination and the feeling of sub space was so well done that this is still one of the hottest things I've read in the past year.
More please!