by Evil Alpaca
My god... I've been visiting this site for a few years now, and in all that time, I've never come across a story that I've loved this much. I really wish there was a printer-friendly option, because if there was, I'd print off the entire series without hesitation.
Great work, and I can't wait to see what comes next!
It'snot okay wit Liz with Alice. I wish Heather with Alice. It's making hot sex
i just finsished reading the whol story chapter 1-4. It was amazing, had everything you could poss need in an erotic/romantic story. I can't wait to read some more of your work.
There were only some minor technical errors like incorrect names when refering to the characters, and also some grammatical errors. Nothing that stopped the flow of the story though!
Again, Fucking fantastic!
This story. I wish it could be published! Thank you for writing it.
I would love for this story to be made into a movie! It would be the best movie ever!
Still not keen on the dom/sub theme which to me seems more about humiliation than pleasure. But it was only a small part of this chapter. The real strength was the great drama play between Heather and Laurie. I know they're only fictional characters but I was really worried for them, and I guess that's a sign of good plotting and writing. I've just one more chapter to go and right now, that doesn't feel like it's enough for this excellent story.
You are so bad, bringing tears to my eyes. I was so carried away. This is one of the sweetest stories I know, although with flavour and spices.
Ten hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💖💖💖💖💖 ....... Was it lying or being afraid discrediting a beloved one ...... So its a small gap in between to do the right the perfect the best and as always its about decisions ........ Breathtaking