All Comments on 'Lot's Children'

The story seemed to stop a page early. Loved the build up. It was as though you ran out of puff. Hope you continue the story and the great start flows in to an eight chapter journey

Did you miss a page? What's the point of that kind of build up if there's nothing to build up too. Seriously disappointing. It's like you got bored with your own story and just ended it

This story was fantastic was really getting into it then if just ended like so abruptly. I hope it is continued!

Well….I at least loved it. I have a short attention span and prefer briefer stories! Thanks

Wish this were a complete story.

Bill S.