All Comments on 'Lottery Dreams Ch. 17: Desert Island'

I hope this is not the end of the story. Exciting so far

Thanks, I am amazed anyone reads my stuff, I'm such an amateur. Written years ago, and I've messed the timeline up so much. But I want it to have a better ending than the original. Steve.

Well you just killed the dogs since chocolate is poisonous to them

Sorry, I know I should not have out that, but they lived happily ever after. Steve.

I like the story. You are doing great.

Thanks.