All Comments on 'Love and Loss'

You could have slowed it down a bit more. And I'm not sure he'd have been so happy to see her when the last time he had, she'd called him a liar....

Wonderfully written!

that the story ended abruptly. She caught her husband cheating, then leaves husband and jumps on John. And she still supposedly 'loves' her husband, but has a revenge fuck with John. So since she's still legally married, both Todd & she are cheating (which makes me believe that this should be in the LW category). But this seems to be ok, since they have this 'hidden love' from way back. Anyway, I'm not preaching morals here. It's just that the story seems rushed.

Good romantic story, yes, it's unrealistic, but still i enjoyed it quite a bit. The writer is developing and I encourage him to please continue to write! Good job :)

It reminded me of 'Made of Honor', the movie, with all the punching and loving of the best friend going on. And besides the fact that September Second is my birthday, I thought this story was pretty cool. It had a nice beginning and a middle, but the end was a little abrupt, perhaps. There should've been details about what happened after all that banging; it would have made the end more 'whole'. <3 Lillian, KR.

John was a pushover, he gave in to her too easily.

In my opinion, you could have stretched the "reunion" scene some, and lessened

the sex scene some. Being as this is the "Romance" section, I believe most readers

here are looking for a little more romance and a little less sex.

Of course, and as I said at the beginning, that is just my opinion.

4 stars.