All Comments on 'Love & Obsession'

great to see a new story i thought u had stop, i would another part to Corporate Restructuring

Another great story

A fantastic story, I did not want it to end.

archer, you are so fucking good at this. The dirty talk in particular in unparalleled, and I love your attention to detail in fabrics and fashion. Glad to see you writing again!

Absolutely fantastic! Sad to see it end - more please!

Another great story, in line with some of my favorites of yours. I hope there are more. I loved the Collections series, definitely wished there were more of those but this feels similar.

Great story, really enjoyed her mental process and deliberation. I wish you would have had her desperation drive her to more degrading actions like facials and a cumwalk or to have her pretend to be oblivious to her boobs flopping out in a mall.

Glad you are back with another great story!

Think your stories lose something when there isnt affection between the mc and the girl(s).

Very enjoyable read. I think it had an excellently strong start - the rapidly-escalating competitiveness and desperation was well done. Titjob scenes are relatively unusual, and this one was great. ("Do you still want a picture of me for your contacts?" - inspired!) And of course I'm always a fan of unnecessary D&D references (that thread died out with the dragon habitant line, but to be fair it was a good line).

I think the latter half was a little weaker as the three women quickly blur together, but you still managed a few enjoyable twists there.

As a final comment - you have a bit of a content warning at the start, but for my money "Taking Them With Me" makes this look sweet and romantic - might want a warning on that story if you're concerned!

Wonderful, my fantasy as a story