All Comments on 'Love at First Sight'

It's written well. It's also disturbing as fuck

Thanks! "Disturbing as fuck" was what I was going for. Sorry to any readers who thought this was going to be a simple stroker.

A fun take on e/v. I'm surprised there aren't more stories that interpret voyeurism that way. But the other commenter isn't wrong about "disturbing as fuck".

Disturbing, yes. Effective, very. The mood and pace capture a malevolence, but there's always the question, does she know? Definitely a five.

Very well written piece, good job. Worthy of Five Stars.

"Disturbing as fuck" -- you absolutely nailed it. With many stories, a sequel would be really interesting but in this case, please don't write one. I am scared where the story might go.

5*

5 Stars! So well written. Disturbing, but so fascinating to see into the mind of a voyeur.