All Comments on 'Love at First Slight'

A great read. Very well written and insightful. Five stars.

Beautiful, as always. The way you weave words is magical!! And in all honesty, doesn't everyone want their mommy to be happy and proud of us? 😉

Well written: Thank You.

What an awesome story, well written especially the built up narrative.

Would love if there was a second part .

Excellent job! Thank you

Really well written, the two are absolutely loveable. But Valentine is feb 14th, not feb 12th. :)

@Anonymous - Oh dear. You're absolutely right. I don't know why I thought it was the 12th. I just checked my calendar and I have it written as the 12th there too. Pretty funny how I get the date wrong in a Valentine's Day challenge. Haha. I should probably get that fixed, though at the same time, I like leaving little mistakes like this as lessons - a reminder of my failures. Next time, even when I think I have a date or a name right, I will make sure to double check! Thank you for pointing that out.

loved the story, would have enjoyed seeing pics of the action. A movie would be incredibly horny but not one of those rushed wham bam efforts.

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Well done and well developed fun 5 star entertainment. Well played. Cheers

Love the build up, the characters and the story itself. great job. Now for I did not like the words THE END at the end. I would have love to read a whole lot more of this new love and how it blossoms. 5 stars

Loved the story and Agee that it could use another chapter.

Thank you.