All Comments on 'Love Begins at 19'

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sweet romance between siblings...I'd say it needs a sequel soon...take it to the next level... keep the romance too, that is way hotter

badly needs another chapter... take their seduction to the next level with full-blown romance and erotica...it's gonna be hotter

No talking, No hugging

I barely gave 3 stars.

THIS WAS THE WORST ATTEMPT AT MAKING LOVE EVER.

NO LOVE, NO AFFECTION, NO TENDERNESS , NO CARING.

SHE GOT NO STIMULUS. SHE GAVE AWAY HERMOST PRIZED POSSESSION AND GOT NOTHING IN RETURN. A HAIR BRUSH HAD MORE LOVE

Did you hate your sister or brother that much.

If you do another chapter make sure you add some love and tender affection or this will be ONE STAR.

Interesting comments.

This, and its sequel, are written more from the male perspective and focus more on the physical.

What would be more effective: writing each chapter twice, from each perspective; writing alternating male/female viewpionts; or simply remaining with the more physical connection.

(Oddly enough I have a draft chapter explaing why the sister REUSES to kiss her brother.)

No love, no romance basically very little lead up to the sex. The story has potential but it's to quick. The sister didn't appear to get any satisfaction or even an orgasm, they didn't even kiss.

YES, this sounds like a brother and sister reaching puberty and exploring their new found sexuality, with one another ......Because of the actual unspoken , LOVE AN AND TRUST BETWEEN THEM,,,,,, they were able to have a first experience that seemed to be a very positive one .

Keep writing ,you have the jist.

you turned her on but you came so fast she wasn't even close to satisfied, so your a lousy fucker...