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The tape had ended and the trailer was quiet except for our rapid breathing. Outside I could here the leaves of the cottonwoods rustling, and the distant sounds of frogs singing.
Slowly I raised myself up on my elbows, still deeply buried in my lover's warmth to look into her face. Her face was no longer pale, but flushed and pink with health. Her blue eyes shown from the tears that matched my own, and the smile was as radiant as the sun.
I wanted to tell her everything about my life. I wanted to share with her even the tiniest details of my strengths and weaknesses. I wanted to transcend all the boundaries life placed between two people with this woman. But I am only a man, and she is only a woman. In the end I just lay my head on her chest, and let her caress my face and run her fingers through my hair.
For once, I did not have to go home.
- COMMENTS
rbloch66about 1 month agoA truly incredibly, touching story. I’m not ashamed to admit I cried all through it. The way you wrote the pain, longing, and loneliness was palpable. I will remember this story.
ChiBoy44about 4 years agoI believe, in part this story should go under ' Loving Couples' instead of Sci-Fi....You write enough background to show the reader who your characters are, yet captivate us to keep reading. Most Excellent work. This is the first time I have read your work. I have been reading Erotica for over 30+ years. Great work!!!
FreeJohnover 5 years agoThank You Solitary_Thinker for sharing this wonderful gift with us.
Please keep writing!!!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoVery few stories on Lit hits the reader 'in the feels' as much as this one does. The writing is very efficient: descriptive, concise, and very expressive. Rarely do I read a story and not think of the grammar corrections needed, yet the character development, pacing, and style drew me in completely. To the point that I failed to notice a single needed grammatical correction.
I look forward to reading the other stories =)
Anonymousabout 6 years agoAs is it’s pretty darn good
turquiosekittenalmost 13 years agoThis was excellently written and is a beautiful, moving story. I loved it.
APeacefulPlaceTxalmost 14 years agoI don't think I've seen the idea before. It was very well done. although I don't generally like to have the story go as long before I understand the nature of the conflict. You pushed it right to edge, where I would have stopped reading if not for the score. Still well done.
HedgeWitchabout 16 years agolove heals all things...and this story is very well written and wonderfully refreshing. Thank you forletting us read it and i'll definitely add you as a favorite.
Moonlight_on_Waterover 17 years agoYour pacing and plot are excellent. Your characters and their motivations are well thought out and revealed as the plot moves forward. I have known professional writers that did not do as well.
Time to get back to my own writing…..
Thanks,
Moonlight_on _Water
angelicminxover 17 years agoWonderful tale of love and healing. I noticed some confusion with then/ than, but it didn't detract from the story. I connected with the characters and you sucked me into the story... like quicksand, it wouldn't let me go. The tone of the story reminded me of Dean Koontz, my favorite author. I liked that this story did not focus on the erotic, I believe making it erotic would have stripped away some of the feeling. While I wish it were longer (what GOOD story is ever long enough? :D), I'm left with a feeling of satisfaction. Brian and Sasha will never have to be alone again and they will know reciprical love, a gift from God that we should all joyfully receive.
Thank you for letting me see into their world. Thank you for letting me believe, if only for a moment, that love can truly heal. ~Minx
