All Comments on 'Love Hurts, Love... Ch. 01'

cant wait ....pls. continue

the build up is good as well, I am glad because most stories do not build up a story as well as you do, and by the second page they just jump into bed and have sex, but your stories take time to build up and is worth waiting for, thank you can't wait for the next part

Hmmm, it's ok, kinda generic and average but I would still read another chapter. Perhaps, the writing and telling of the story will be more complex. I'm pulling for you jayrs.

i can totally relate to dawn here but in my case ,my bestie is straight but i did confess my love for her.

Sorry to hear that :)

My friend I think more than anything wanted to get it off her chest she was a lesbian. I had a feeling she was. I told her she could come and talk to me anytime. Sadly she went and told a straight friend who couldn't handle it at all and wouldn't talk to her.

The story itself was fairly general, likeable characters with a relatable plot. Nice job on all that. BUT the dialogue writing is terrible and following along is more difficult than it should be. Als the way it's set up there's no emotive detail while they're speaking. Just 'I said...' 'she told me...' 'she said...'.

LOVE HURTS, LOVE... CH. 01 when will CH 02 AND ENDING COMING