All Comments on 'Love in Chains Ch. 02'

Disturbing but I'm hooked. Please continue, I would very much like to see where this goes.

I always prefer third person to first, and so I loved this chapter more. However, you have made a contract with the reader, and you did not fulfill it. Starting in medias res in chapter one and avoiding the details is fine. It's a nice technique. But by gliding over how Adam amused himself while waiting for the final indulgence, is not meeting the contract with the reader. You should reveal what Adam did. It tells us about his character and it heightens the suspense concerning the sleeping Nye.

The characters, with the exception of Nye, are full and multifaceted. Don't back away when the opportunity to dig deeper presents itself. (Nye true to his objectification by Adam should, until you decide, remain an object, an object in Adam's hands.)

In writing this, the author wrote the TRUTH. Bondism isnt about enjoyment, sex and definitely NOT about love. Its about degeneracy. About a malicious and sick desire to injure another human being, a WEAKER human being, for.....what?! It is NOT normal to crave inflicting violence upon weak, helpless beings. Getting off on it is even sicker. This chapter tells it like it is. Adam doesnt give A/F about Nye. He thinks Nye is stupid. He preyed on Nye because of his inexperience, because he is too young to understand that Adam is a sick mofo. All predators seek out young victims because they are ultimately cowards, incapable of a fair fight, or any real feeling, or real relationship. Adam gleefully tortures an innocent by manipulating his feelings and its despicable. All bondism, D/s is. The author wrote a story which was so beautiful that I cried. In it the author wrote:

"No one deserves to be hurt by those who are supposed to be taking care of them. No one deserves to be brutalised and beaten. No one deserves to be betrayed by those they trust the most. Most of all, no one deserves to be punished for the way they were born."

I know that is true. We all do. So how in the hell are we supposed to justify that with THIS?! It is impossible. THIS is unacceptable and demented. It is torture. Just because a sick fuck, like Adam, gets off on this shit, doesnt mean it is NORMAL Never acceptable.