All Comments on 'Love In The Name of Power'

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AWhoopsieDaisyAWhoopsieDaisyabout 2 years agoAuthor

Comments and Votes would be greatly appreciated. Let me know if you want this particular story to continue.

Gamergal126Gamergal126about 2 years ago

I would love more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

There's a major typo where a couple of paragraphs are copied into the wrong spot breaking up a scene.

"Mhm. Why did you leave me?" Lazu pullThe prince throws his legs over the edge of the fainting couch and sits up. The room is lined with books. In the center is a desk covered in a mess of papers and wax seals.

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A nurse walks in. "Sir Victor sent me to check-" before the nurse can finish the prince has already slipped past her.

s the other man gently into a kiss.

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I'm a creative writing and animation major in college. I'm here mostly by coincidence. I write plot with porn. Not porn with plot. Strong characterization is important to me. If I can't get attached to the characters I can't enjoy the work. I'm a queer woman (fumbling with...