All Comments on 'Love in the Pool'

YUK! another gay story

Story felt disjointed with Tracy fucking Jill and then disappearing. Paula grew up very fast and while in high-school tells her mom that she knows her brother I really her father. Page three appears to be an outline of story development. Not a happy reader.

Bits of this were OK, but largely the completely appalling dialogue was too much of an annoyance.

Whenever I read truly bad dialogue, I have to wonder if the "author" has ever actually heard people speaking...