All Comments on 'Love in the Shadows Ch. 01'

This is quite a creative take on the traditional damsel in distress story. I enjoyed it, but I think it would be helpful to proofread your work a little more, or get an editor, as there were a lot of spelling errors that spellcheck wouldn't get. I'll look forward to seeing more of this story.

Good start,interesting plot for a beginner.Looking forward to reading more.With more experience your writing will get better.