All Comments on 'Love is Blind and Sometimes Stupid'

It should have been in Humor/Satire

I didn't read anything past the illiterate description supplied by the writer. If he can't get that right, what use is it to waste my time reading the whole text?

The delivery needs work. Get an editor and work on fleshing it out more. It's a good idea, just needs work. Nice first attempt.

a great story to do in turkey language(whats up with that crap)

Started interesting, then moved into satire (at least, I hope it was satire) and quickly degenerated into two unlikable characters, a pathetic dumbass and a manipulative, smartass bitch. And this story didn't even have a reasonable ending which would have been quickly solved by good old fashioned communication - after many years, this couple didn't know how to talk to each other???? get out of here!

It had the potential of being a good story, however, the end was terrible with no proper ending. If you are going to attempt writing again think the plot through. Cheers Roger.

The character descriptions were pretty good as we discover who Billy Bob and Roxy are. The plot's a bit strange as most men take it unkindly when they think their wife's cheating on them. Using hypothetical infidelity in an attempt to avoid the boredom of the empty nest is equivalent to lancing a boil with a cattle prod. It hurts and it doesn't work that well. Preventative medicine is fine for personal health issues but it might not be the best prescription for marital harmony.

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The story's plot is bare so work on that for your next story. Thank you for your effort.

Clever idea. And where is it writen that a story has to have an ending anyway. Life is not alweays a school boy essay.

Just another hate filled rant with no meat to it either. There is nothing erotic about a guy wanting to kill someone and dump his wife. This story doesn't belong on Literotica.

it's good to get it over with

Both have no idea what life is about

This is a good story idea which ends too soon and lacks detail. Yes, many marriages hit the rocks when the kids leave, but many survive. What happens?

and this story is just PLAIN FUCKING STUPID...

right so perhaps she can? BMOC playing football almost qualifies you for near brain dead and she thought that was a qualification to be a parent? What woman, having even half a brain, would fake an affair to make her husband pay more attention to her? Pay more attention you bet, get angry, throw her out, file for divorce ASAP even if you have to go to Reno to get it. Who wants to support a slut or even a wannabe slut?

very immature

androgenist fem writer, putin down males indiscriminately so often she's probably a fem homosexual.

I'm leaning toward the latter. Three stars for making the effort.

Maybe you should try again.

Without a doubt, it was this authors first try and pathetic it was.

It's nice to be caught off guard by a story plot thanks keep writing don't get discouraged with comments from us morons

IN FACT ALL 3 OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS ARE GOOD. GOOD GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION, GOOD PLOTS CHARACTER AND STORY LINES. HOWEVER, LIVING IN THE S.D. AREA YOU SHOULD BE ABLE TO DRAW ON MORE COMPLEX AND DETAILED STORIES AND NOT WAIT LIKE 07,08 AND 11 TO PUBLISH. YOU ARE ON THE RIGHT TRACKI. KEEP IT UP. P.S. GO TO PUERTO NUEVO OR ENSENDADA....TK U MLJ LV NV

IMHO.

But I would bet that in a quick vote that most everyone would disagree!

Too stupid and corny

Thanks for the read.

Not worthy of commenting.

stupid is as stupid stays with all things equal. TK U MLJ LV NV

Short, yes, which is ok. But still needed a little bit more detail. We haven’t a clue to how Billy Bob thought Rox was doing. Perhaps just a few more paragraphs of detail and it would have been enough. I like Rox’s character, so could have used a little more there too. Anyway, just a little here and there would have been a more complete picture. Hmmm... analogy: this was a smidge more than an outline of a story, but not quite enough to be a complete sketch. If that makes sense.

But I liked it.

I have seen some usually smart women come down with a case of dumbass because of the stupid ass games they insist on playing.

Surprisingly, I.liked this little story a lot.more than I expected to.

Amusing lighthearted love story. Brightens up a normally darkly written genre. Thank you.

Stupid woman, stupid story.

The writer is Stupid also😂