All Comments on 'Love Is Like a Soufflé Pt. 02'

by ElderDirt

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DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

I love this naughty story of wicked gongs on between a naughty Japanese elf and the man she seduced so she could have her wicked way with him. Poor man I feel really sorry for him. But I bet he wouldn't have it any other way, hmmm. Great fun loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thanks for a great conclusion to your Part 1. Loved it for its sassy humor and interplay between the two lover. Keep writing.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 2 years ago

Hot little story. Yeah, so it was a bit mushy so mushy can be good. It just takes the right fantasy and talented writer.

Happy New Year, ElderDirt! I always look forward to your offerings. This one did not disappoint!

Cheers

SAHGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it, simply loved it! A fitting chapter to the first one. Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jap is a slur.

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