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by Verhaalen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

If only divorce and divorcée were the same word. This might make more sense, or at least be a bit better.

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEabout 1 year ago

Almost there. Misses a page to be a real romance. But nicely written.

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A short story writer in various genres. Of Dutch birth but living in the UK for many years. I appreciate comments but do not respond to them, sorry.