All Comments on 'Love is Where One Finds It'

Nice job starting your story off with a lecture. Making the accusation that if someone doesn't like your stories it's because they don't like empowered women is ridiculous. Nice job.

Wow this is your seventh story in such a short amount of time! And with three series going on, that's a lot to keep up with!

Keep up the hard work. You are improving! Try to give the characters a little more dialogue so we can really feel them coming to life.

I had to chuckle about Beth's renaming; my late sister was named Marybeth, but we all called her "MB" because she couldn't abide the name "Beth."

I can only say brilliant story and your stories are the ones I read many times and not wanting to read others and look for your next story billyslate. xxx

Had to stop reading after page 2 sorry, technically it's good and no it's nothing to do with powerful women, just something wrong that rubbed me the wrong way can't explain it I'm not good with words.