by Obsessive_Lesbian
because its title caught my attention. You are really a brilliant author.
Rachel Morgan
I loved reading this story. The romance and love rules through out the story plot and the sex scenes are awesome!
this should have been about bianca and raymond ONLY adding jessicas story only confuses the story and pulls the readers out of the flow. delete and rewrite it keeping it to only the two main characters and add more background, character development and detail.
There was no lesbian incest in this chapter. Still good, though!