All Comments on 'Love, Layna Pt. 03'

I teach college students and this enchanting series shows the author's immense imagination, but also makes one wonder about fantasy & real worlds that exist in the lives beyond the surface.

I'm looking forward to reading more stories like this one, and their series if they are more to come.

I feel so bad for Jessica. I know that we established in part one that she's an ex, but, poor girl :(

In terms of the writing, I appreciate the effort put into the plot and the way you are writing what you want to see in the world. I just with there had been more time spent filling scenes with imagery (especially about Violet, I really only know her as an anime archetype, and I wasn't able to root for her in her wish to date Layna) I personally would have preferred that the sex felt less... penis focused, but that probably says more about me than your writing. Overall I appreciate your efforts to write erotica for trans women, as I find the stories about us here are almost always written for someone else. Look forward to seeing more in the future,

yours,

Rhea