All Comments on 'Love, Lust & Family Pt. 02: Embrace'

WOW!!!! So Sexy, looking forward to reading more chapters :)

I loved this part 2! Very sexy at the hot tub scene, but completely sensual at the threesome. And now I'm hoping part 3 has a scene with Jesse and Josh.

I guess you only pay attention to the ass-kissing comments, so go ahead, keep writing like this, I give up. 1 star

Hi anonymous. I understand that you prefer a different style of writing. I'd offer these two points; 1. I write for myself. If I enjoy the style then I'll keep it. 2. Some of the short sentences are deliberate. When things get hot and heavy and the tempo picks up the sentences get shorter.

I hope you find something you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing these stories.

But why open it for comments if you don't want critique?

I thought the story was okay, but it moved unevenly, sort of the way I would in my rough draft.

Is josh not going to tell his girlfriend Mariah what just happened? Since Mariah started to open about her family to him that she's having incestuous with her sisters, why not tell her that he also fucked Samantha aside from having a partial threesome with her. And also that he saw the twins fucking and he joined in. Also Josh should ask Mariah if she and her younger brother Jesse have been fucking.

Why hesitate or keep it a secret with his girlfriend? When she's open about it?

So far this the best chapter /series I read can’t wait to finish it

what a sexy well-told tale. 5 stars.