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oldsage_1oldsage_16 months ago

Loved the episode.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

This is good writing and a nice story, but for the love of god! tone it down with the commas! It breaks up every sentence in the most weird and annoying places.

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