All Comments on 'Love Slave'

Can you make up your mind on your characters' names? Was it Rick or Nick or was it Jennifer or Sharon?

How can a story be good with your inconsistency in names???

the names thing was distracting, but this was still one very hot piece.

another chapter please.

Nick, Rick, who cares??? This story was really hot. Keep 'em comin'!!!

I was WAAAY to into the story and didnt even notice any name fuck-ups haha... it was really hot tho.. .please make another one and let me know :)

What a great story, but it definetly needs at least 3 more chapters. Chapter 2 would be the rest of tonight's festivities, and 3 and 4 would be her public humiliation at tomorrow night's party!

Really good story, but is her name Jennifer or Sharon, and is his name Nick or Rick.

But it really belongs in the BDSM category. I didn't sense much noncensent or reluctance.

Not only does this story belong in the BDSM category but it is very misleading. Is her Master's name Rick or Nick?

Basically, an okay fuck story, ‘whip it in, whip it out and wipe it’ in different colours. There is no supporting narrative that could give depth to the story. Most importantly, who is she and how did she come into this situation. BUT, please be consistent with your names. You really do need an editor; is he Rick or Nick? Is she Sharon or Jennifer?