by LittleBrain
Fantastic writer , i love the tension you put in your stories , i enjoyed reading all your stories
In close to a decade (maybe more, but who's countung) of reading stories, this is the first and only story/series I have ever commented on. This is an excellent example of good writing that draws the reader in, and keeps them mesmerized by the crafting of your woven tale. KUDOS!!!!
Well written story with a very good plot. I really enjoyed the read
Little Brain, I must say this has got tobe one of thee best stories ive read on here you captured me ( excuse the pun ) from the very start , the overflow dirty rooms and elf like girl , the story had depth and warmth mystery and erotism I can't say enough praise your a author I will keep a eye out for for sure ,
Thankyou
You did justice with your characters, very consistent, and that’s a big deal!
That said, it might be interesting if Greg crossed over into the world of A Good Working Relationship... Paul could put Greg’s skills to good use... and Luka makes a good recovery example for Marisa.
This is the second series of yours I have read. I like your style and how you develop the characters. 5 * Please continue with the ideas you have and I look forward to more of your writing. Thanks for your time and efforts.
Like the characters. Nice to have action balance the romance. Romance is a great genre for erotic stories. Keep up the good work.
Most excellent. Great characters and scenes. I too like happy endings.
We liked this story well thought out and constructed. The detox was over simplified but excused for speed and story flow. I shall have to read other now as I did enjoy this one
I really enjoyed this. One of the best. Thanks for the epilogue. Finished it off nicely. I had to settle for 5*. They don't give us more. I vastly prefer stories that are far more than sex, that have good guys and bad guys, problems to solve and risk and reward. Great job.
I have really enjoyed this story. Thank you. 5 well deserved stars.
A true happy ending to a romance full of intrigue, revenge and reconciliation.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Love the story and love you for giving us the closure this story deserves! Now that the bad guys are taken care of and she's back to her true health they can have the deserved happy ever after and work on those babies.
Gave you a 5* as per usual and I guess we'll see you on your next adventure!