All Comments on 'Love Unexpected Ch. 03'

But things are going too smooth, lol, I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop! Great chapter.

i think the title sums it up

This story is really romantic and sweet. Paul is a real treasure and Derek realizes that. You had a lot of heat in this chapter... nice! I look forward to the next chapter.

Peace and joy,

Shell

I love it. I can understand nomoretears feeling uncomfortable because every one of her stories someone is being kidnapped or attacked but be true to your own vision for your characters.

Love it and I agree with Nomoretears a great chapter and hurry with the next one there has to be more.... Very hot, sexy sweet and lovely

CUTE!!!!!

seems to be really plain sailing for these two - love it that they are getting life easy but can't help worrying aobut the inevitable fly in the ointment that is bound to come along and cause issues between them, other than that endearing and really well written thankyou x

romantic!! I love it!! The camaraderie between them is just amazing!! I love the slow build up truly enjoyed the foreplay!! Yes!! LOL. Truly love Paul and Derek.....just a couple of down to earth guys...heck, I wouldn't mind having them as friends. :)

Hope you post the next chapter soon....enjoying it!! (:

Cheers! (:

Boy oh boy! man I loved it! cannot wait for the next chapter! =)

Again, I'll say that I'm looking forward to an obstacle or two.

You have an entertaining writing style and have created two lovable characters. Their love story happened amazingly smoothly, though - not that it wasn't fun. But now is the time to test the strength of their bond, I think.

I'm no party pooper, I swear :) I merely find the dynamics of facing challenges far more engrossing than an easy ride. And overcoming challenges shows love at its most intense.

But this is your story. And I am an excited reader. So take me where you will, because I will be sticking around for the rest.

Good work,

AH

I was happy to see a new submission from you. This is a wonderful story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

When I read the first chapter I got this vibe from a certain character and I'm wondering if he's gonna be the one to cause conflict in this story...John seemed just a little too interested in finding out what pauls type was and meeting derek. So everytime his named pop up my brain would go hmmm. But that's just one of my thoughts. Lol can't wait to see how the story turns out either way!!!

Love the build up; please no cheesy melodrama, just keep the same pace.

OMG! Call 911. that had to be one of the hottest chapter on lit! I could almost swear i saw my water glass bubbling! Girl, keep it up...

enjoying this, nice pace, slowly developing the characters and their relationship

This story is my perfect cup of coffee: sweet and steaming hot ...