by adamlily1972
I can't believe you wrote all that socjus college jargon without vomiting. I admire your mental fortitude.
Awesome work! Really funny (the Dolezal-American bit about had me rolling on the floor), but as a fan of mind control and interracial, this was really hot too!
You had me at 'got your quinoa, babe'. This deserves well above the current score. The trolls on here have no sense of humour.
The tone and details are great. I like how the black guy is normal, instead of stereotyped.
I do not like the mention of each speaker's name before each sentence; it makes the story messy. That is not a criticism of the story itself.