by tallone123
I love the language different but cool. Thanks for sharing.
your name isn't Giles?
more please
Great source to make a sequel
Great start looking for the next chapter soon!
Good start to a great story line. I am sure you can do many more chapters and maybe even get some other couples from there work place into the story.
is measurements. So I stopped reading and gave it one star.
Thank you -- five stars.