All Comments on 'Lover of Rain, Rain Lover? Ch. 01'

I really like the set up of this story, but I wish you had just gotten deeper into the sexiness straight away if the storyline/ character is going to be so simple. (Simple isn’t a bad thing, troupes are mostly fine in erotica.) As is usually true, some more careful proofreading wouldn’t go amiss either. Keep it up - I think this could be a really interesting and hot story!