All Comments on 'Lover's Flight Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
well-written but too short

This chapter makes little sense without reading Chapter 1 first. The writing in Chapter 2 is fine, with an excellent romantic atmosphere throughout, but it is too short.

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