All Comments on 'Loving Alex Storm Ch. 02'

by MilkChocolateAmazon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
plzplzplz...dont stop

u have 2 keep on going....and plz dont take too long!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
MORE PLEASE!!!!

THAT WAS GOOD KEEP ON GOING.

i WANNA HEAR MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

great, can't wait for the next part...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
PLEASE!!

PLease!!

continue the story!!

LET ALEX live!!!

please!!

feardesirepainfeardesirepainover 16 years ago
You must continue

I can't wait to read more, I want to hear how things go, I also would like it to be a little longer but that is just me... thanks for sharingand please continue on

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
too corny

the first capter was ok, but this is definitively not, in my opinion. Like i already mentioned in the title...too corny.

There is something missing in the writing style? It seems there are missing sentences too. As if the author didn't have enough time and just wanted to finish the chapter.

LilacWineLilacWineover 16 years ago
Really glad I can read all these at once!

It's a cliffhanger! I'm onto the next one now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sad But Beautiful!!!!!!!!

It's very sad but beautiful!!!! Hope everything works out!!!!! Please keep writing your good at it!!!!!!!!!

alexandra36alexandra36over 13 years ago

Amazing characters! Love these 2. Hope there was more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
oh lord

it was going so well and then the inevitable melodramatic life-threatening accident comes. bored.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
@ anon, 03/18/12 "oh lord"

oh puhleeez!!! shut up! i'm very certain you are the same person who over analysed robcub32's timber wolf pack story... i just hate reading your comments... if you are so gud, write ur own darn stories and stop tryin to spoil the fun for others!!! wat an arse!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
urgh, but yay!

well me i love the way you write, ignore negative comments please.

i like that the car accident is very quick, just like they are in real life. no warning no feelings of trepidation. excellent stuff

sm1982sm1982about 8 years ago
Whoa

Wasn't expecting that ending to this chapter! Seth really is an idiot! He's popular and people know he's gay..he shouldn't have left Alex at the party like that after he said they were going out somewhere tsk tsk.

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