by MilkChocolateAmazon
u have 2 keep on going....and plz dont take too long!!!
I can't wait to read more, I want to hear how things go, I also would like it to be a little longer but that is just me... thanks for sharingand please continue on
the first capter was ok, but this is definitively not, in my opinion. Like i already mentioned in the title...too corny.
There is something missing in the writing style? It seems there are missing sentences too. As if the author didn't have enough time and just wanted to finish the chapter.
It's a cliffhanger! I'm onto the next one now!
It's very sad but beautiful!!!! Hope everything works out!!!!! Please keep writing your good at it!!!!!!!!!
it was going so well and then the inevitable melodramatic life-threatening accident comes. bored.
oh puhleeez!!! shut up! i'm very certain you are the same person who over analysed robcub32's timber wolf pack story... i just hate reading your comments... if you are so gud, write ur own darn stories and stop tryin to spoil the fun for others!!! wat an arse!!!
well me i love the way you write, ignore negative comments please.
i like that the car accident is very quick, just like they are in real life. no warning no feelings of trepidation. excellent stuff
Wasn't expecting that ending to this chapter! Seth really is an idiot! He's popular and people know he's gay..he shouldn't have left Alex at the party like that after he said they were going out somewhere tsk tsk.