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All Comments on 'Loving Daughter'

by IrnWlf

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honeylicker1124honeylicker1124over 9 years ago
Good story but...

a little hard to follow. Too many gaps in the story line. Also, a "luau" is a Hawaiian feast.

If you develop more, please take these thoughts into mind. 4 *'s anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Find another pastime , writing isn’t you forte

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