All Comments on 'Loving Silver Eyes Ch. 03'

by marie_fantasy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I love the story! Keep going. (:

FlpantherFlpantherabout 13 years ago
Bravo!

Keep it up!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 13 years ago
Nice job.

I'm enjoying the story.

MizTMizTabout 13 years ago
Well Paced

I think you are doing a great job with the pace of this story. We know time has passed by the mention of things like tests happening at school. It would've been easy to rush the relationship between Ayden and May, I like that you chose not to. That little line about there "being thinks she didn't know" is a rather loaded statement. I can't wait to see what Ayden thinks May should know before they make love. And I still want to know about the voices. You have done it again, you have left me to eagerly await the next chapter.

somethingsamisssomethingsamissabout 13 years ago

This story is awesome. can't wait for more

marie_fantasymarie_fantasyabout 13 years agoAuthor
hello

Thank you so much for all the awesome comments!!!

I hope my other installations will be to your liking as well!

shortydeeshortydeeabout 12 years ago
Great Read!

I am so glad that I am reading this story. Please Keepup the great work.

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