by marie_fantasy
I think you are doing a great job with the pace of this story. We know time has passed by the mention of things like tests happening at school. It would've been easy to rush the relationship between Ayden and May, I like that you chose not to. That little line about there "being thinks she didn't know" is a rather loaded statement. I can't wait to see what Ayden thinks May should know before they make love. And I still want to know about the voices. You have done it again, you have left me to eagerly await the next chapter.
Thank you so much for all the awesome comments!!!
I hope my other installations will be to your liking as well!
I am so glad that I am reading this story. Please Keepup the great work.