by givemenevergets
Thank you for the compliment, but above all thank you for the story. I have to say it was a great pleasure editing this, and I am especially impressed with your quirky mid-story fantasies, almost like cartoons in words. Keith
Great pacing, great storytelling so far. The characters are fun and engaging. I'm not quite as fond of the fantasy escape sequences, but maybe they'll grow on me. So far they seem to blot out an unbelievable amount of reality.
Anyway, looking forward to more!
I most definitely agree with the other person's comment. To say the least your leaving the story unfinished.
Anyways I'm giving what you've created 5🌟's