All Comments on 'Loving Wife'

by ultramannc

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What are you, dense?

There's literally a category named Loving Wives for this kind of stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
NEEDS EDITOR, SPEEK CHECK, GRAMMAR CHECK

The plot is really good. But for the love of all, PLEASE have someone CHECK THE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR if you don't know how! It really ruins things when you can't read it without misspellings almost every sentence. The flies is a little awkward also.

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Reading erotica is a passion I have always had. I have a great energy to write stories of fantasies. Hope all will find my writing entertaining as well as stimulating. Please comment on my writing, good, bad or just a note. All criticism is welcome.