All Comments on 'Loving Wife Ch. 01'

You have done a remarkable job of developing the characters in this story. I was hooked from the beginning, and I'm eager to see where you take this story.

I also find it interesting that you placed a story called "Loving Wife" in this category instead of "Loving Wives." Probably a wise decision, as you'll avoid some of the nastier comments and one-star ratings.

Excellent start. Can't wait for more!

You did it again T_N, with another story written from the perspective of a Real Life Wife, a real human being.

I know from experience, that many of the wives and girlfriends that engage in spouse swapping and orgies, were bullied and even physically beaten into participating.

Then of course, the infantile trolls will always blame the females, of what ever age, that the reality of group sex never measures up to the masturbatory fantasies of the perpetually adolescent.

I can tell you've got the start of another excellent story. Not sure I agree with fanfare's characterization of 'many' women in the swinging lifestyle. Maybe in their area. But it does happen and it is sad to see.

The story is an accurate representation of what a real house party looks like though. Average people fulfilling part of what they need. And Ann's words were very true.

Excellnet dialogue and insights into the wife's thoughts. Pls continue

I can't wait to read more. Such a realistic portrayal of many relationships & people. It had titalating elements, that beg for more graphic detail when the time is right for the main characters. A great tease as a first chapter.

Very similar to my recollection of house parties. My wife was very reluctant to attend until her inhibitions dissolved as a younger man overcame her reluctance to participate. He was very subtle in his seduction technique.

I agree with previously expressed opinion that you have accurately portrayed the typical house party and attendees. Your opinion that these are real people who are fun to get to know is probably the best piece of information a novice can go into the place knowing.

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I wanna be her! I am her!!!