All Comments on 'Luca and the Long, Hard Summer Ch. 06'

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mrfallonemrfalloneover 3 years ago
More, please

So hot!

I've waited for this chapter what seems like ages.

But it was worth it, I'm achingly hard 😈

I really hope you're continuing with the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Finally! So good, more please!

HHYagamiHHYagamiover 3 years ago
Wonderful Story

I really appreciate your work with this story, you have built the characters and the tension between them in a wonderful way. I also appreciated that you kept the sex scenes from excalating too quickly, giving more credibility to the story and giving the readers something to look for in the further chapters.

What about the next chapter/chapters? I see this chapter as a fitting conclusion, with the last sentence "It was never a 'maybe'. He was definitely soft." wrapping up with the "Hard summer" of the story's title, but i also think there are still some things about the feelings for each other to explore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Worth the wait

Good story = you have to have a wank after. Outstanding story = you don't fancy having a wank after because it'll never be as good as the sex in the story. Thanks for writing this x

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Incredible. Utterly incredible.

I visited literotica to fap, but your story touched my heart and my soul.

Thanks a lot for this.

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