by Voboy
Fascinating read, given that I am Liz/Liza/Eliza/Elizabeth/Beth and have light green eyes. Have we met?
Erotic and quite enjoyable.
for your BS name dropping of Joyce & McCarthy while adding a little insult as well. Jackass.
This was really well written with interesting characters and solid dialogue. The whole spineless, dick-driven trope, however, isn't one that I enjoy. I understand you did this for drama purposes, but I feel there are better ways to add tension to your story.
I can only assume that you once knew a Liz/Eliza/Beth/Elizabeth/Betsy/etc. because your portrayal of her is so we'll written. The reluctant Lukey is also well done and equally believable. Great story, thanks.
Excellent work. Great to find a decent cheating story without the usual clichés
This is probably the best story I've ever read on Literotica, and I've read hundreds. Well done.