All Comments on 'Lucian's Temptations Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well Done!

You can go so many places with this story and all would be powerful energetic and erotic , Cannot wait until the next chapter comes out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More Please great beginning

Look forward to seeing what direction you take. Of course the birth of their baby please :) Thank you for writing

VinylLizzieVinylLizziealmost 4 years agoAuthor
Author's response!

Thank you for your positive comments. I do have ideas in my head where to take it, but interested to know if any of you readers have any ideas where you would like to see it go!

SoftKtty24SoftKtty24over 2 years ago

That was seriously HOT

rubberpony37rubberpony37almost 2 years ago

Very nice. Really like the addition of the vinyl clothes. Super sexy!

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I am an artistic lady who enjoys writing erotica purely for fun. Sometimes my imagination runs away with me and I just need to put it on paper! I hope you enjoy reading my sexy stories which invariably feature shiny clothing which is a big turn on for me, although I don’t cla...

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