All Comments on 'Lucky'

by EdwardStiles

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked the story and I confess that I love it when a man uses me for his pleasure and then just leaves so I feel all used and dirty and wonderful x sissy Lucy

woodseaveswoodseavesover 1 year ago

Another short but powerful story. Used and abandoned. Left with nothing but two loads, and the reaffirmation that it's the wy of things..

Foxinsox24Foxinsox24over 1 year ago

Loved this story as well! I love your writing, it flows fast, smooth, and allows for a lot of mystery. There is not a crazy level of detail about the characters, the room, the setting. And yet, it all feels very familiar, still. That lack of specific detail allows the reader to write themselves into the story, be the character they want to be, look how they want to look, wear what clothes they want to wear, and be in a country and setting that feels the most magical and romantic to them.

You're a pro. Thank you for sharing this prose with us. ♡

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Edward Stiles is a pseudonym. I write under many. Although I am nonexistent, if you wish to contact me, I can be reached at edstiles243@mail.com. Cheers!