by sandy_rock
you wasted all this time and we missed the story.teasing stories are for kids.write like an adult.
Good story , do not be discouraged by the person who left the bad feedback.
i dont understand why you didnt just make this story one chapter with multiple parts. this is a good story but way way too short. it all happens too fast too every chapter is boom boom boom boom over. this happens that happens then this happens ok chapter over.